writing task : who i admire

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its actually my english's homework essay , but suddenly i feel like posting it when i realized that its been quite a little while since my last post x) so here it is .. :)

[it is my homework essay so please understand if there's any grammar error or me exaggerating xP thank you ;)]

     A person who i admire very much is the famous Oprah Winfrey.I often watch her talk show on television with my mum.Although she's non-muslim, she had these qualities that we muslims should have.
     She's fifty something but she looks a lot younger than her age.She is strong and healthy and her hair is black and wavy.Her smile is beautiful as flowers.
     She is a very funny and a warm lady.She's also a very humble person for a millioner,perhaps a billioner.Even her famous friends and celebrities admit this fact.Her topics in her show are also very helpful for the people around the world.
     Oprah likes giving without taking.She would donate every single penny she has.Maybe its because she's divorced and doesn't had any children to spend her money on but not everyone could be that generous and give out money like that, right?
     When i grow up, i hope that i can be like Oprah Winfrey so that i could help all those people who are in need in this big world.

so how was it? do correct me if there's any wrong with my grammars or my facts :) that's all, B Y e B Y e :)

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